Essay Comments

The strongest aspect of my writing is grammar. I rarely make grammatical errors and I structure my sentences well. However, there are a couple areas in which I need to work on. First, stating my point. I have trouble writing what I'm trying to say. I think of exactly what I want to say but I spend a great amount of time figuring out how I want to say it. I also need to think more "outside the box". Meaning, I need to think of more interesting ideas and points for my essays so the readers get drawn in and hopefully, even enjoy reading my work. Dr. Forman stated in his essay comments that I needed to answer the question more carefully. I guess I tried thinking "outside the box" but I didn't connect my idea to the prompt thoroughly enough.