Essay Comments Blog (Claudius Essay)

I feel that my essay was well-written and descriptively showed my points of view on King Claudius and how superficial he truly is. I supported my points well with textual evidence but might have gotten a little too carried away and off topic. I also think I could have lengthened my conclusion paragraph by adding a new point of view or idea. Overall, I feel that I wrote a well-written essay regardless of the small "mistakes" that it contained.